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Do you think i should become an author? Please read paragraph and tell me what yThis forum post has messages dated from 07/18/10 through 11/17/11, please be sure to read all the messages. If you feel it is old or outdated, please follow up with a question or comment and someone may be able to update it, or reply with newer information if you have it. Missouri - Sights
| Do you think i should become an author? Please read paragraph and tell me what y Lexy we are going to Florida! Really? I exclaimed?! I can't believe it! Hey my name is Lexy and I live in Kansas and I have never been anywhere except Kansas (of course) or Missouri and i have never been on a plane either. This is a big step up for me. Shea we are going to Florida (Shea is my older sister she is 15 and I'm 12. We arrive at the airport and their is so many people there I couldnt believe it. (Well southwest airlines is really good) and we put our luggage down and check in it took about an hour maybe but I didnt care I was going on a plane! When we were done with all the checking in and luggage and all that we went to an overpriced (they need to make a living to) bookstore where I got a bible to read on the two hour flight from Kansas to Florida. Well my grandma was going to so it was my mother, Shea, me, and my grandma. I got on the plane and sat next to my grandmother and some other guy sat next to her. I begged to get the window seat, and lucky me I got it. As we took off i was jumping and my smile went from ear to ear. I wanted to read a lot of my bible but i was in awe at the amazing sights and tiny people and trees. I kept guessing where we were on the flight. Is this Georgia? I think so. Finally we got off the plane. into a place where PALM TREES GREW! i was so excited i have never seen palm trees before and the air was so warm all the time. I wanted to rent a car (which took time) and just leave to our hotel and the beach and everything that awaited me! Of course getting your luggage, renting a car and everything took so long. But did i care? nope! We drove our rental car (Jeep) to our beautiful hotel. It's called the Alden. We checked in their and as we walked to our room we were right on the beach! With me and my sisters clothes still on not bathing suit we ran through our screen door and into the water where we splashed and laughed and pure happiness that brung tears to my mothers eyes. Thats how happy we were. (can you blame us? We have never seen the ocean before) Then w |
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I won't comment directly on your paragraph, because it is way too long. Needs to be about 3 paragraphs. The formatting just isn't good. And if its not formated good, and no one reads it.. then it doesn't matter if it is good or if you are a good writer. Sorry. |
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